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23/12/07

What Completes?

A friend asked me a while ago, Prashant what completes you? and I could not answer that.. there is so much... too much of space around that needs to be filled !!!

Small question, big answer...

It however helped a few words come out and fill some empty space.. here they are.. enjoy :) and feel free to add...

पहाड़ की चोटी
नदी का किनारा
चुप चुप बैठा था
तभी साला किसी ने पत्थर मारा
देखा तो मेरा बॉस था
मुझे कुछ होश था
याद आया ईमेल नहीं करी ...
ख़ुशी की मछली तभी उस नदी मे मरी
मैं वापस काम पर
आगे बदने के नाम पर
अभी तक काम कर रह हूँ
एक एक दिन करके जीवन से गुज़र रहा हूँ
और ख़ुशी की मछली वही किनारे पर रह गई
जितनी तस्सली दिल मे थी वो कहीं उस गहरे पानी की धारा मे बह गयी

22 comments:

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  2. Tassalli kahin bahin nahin hai abhi,

    Dekho na! khushi ki machhli kinaare par hi hai ruki...

    Haath badhaao to sahi tum....


    wah, wah, wah!!! :-)

    p.s. pehle comment mein ek galati ho gayi thi isliye remove kar diya...

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  3. mila ke likhna hai kya????

    Haath badhaao to sahi tum.....

    Khak hi naseeb hogi...

    Kyunki machli phisal kar kisi aur ko ehsas dila rahi hogi....


    Amazing.......


    Regards

    Aro the poet of the dark side with a moonshine background

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  4. @ aro:

    confidence ko hindi mein kya kehte hain re?

    next line likhne ke liye chahiye :-)

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  5. hehe.. this is interesting..

    Confidence is Vishwas..

    and please note.. ye zyada serious nai hone ka... agar thoda fun ya humor nai hai aapni char line mein to kuch aur socho phir likho !!!

    Aro tu to poet hai re :D

    Anjuli maidam... gyan nai gyan nai.. fun aur humour ke saath thoda thoda serious play...

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  6. It was nostalgic or may be i was in the same mood...anyways looovely post.

    And confidence means aatm vishwas.

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  7. @Om: :-p

    shuru kyoon kiya? ab jhelo ;-)

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  8. # You...
    :) thanks...

    # Anjuli...
    well.. shuru to satire se hua hai.. aur khatam bhi light mode par hi hoga.. serious kuch likha to padunga bhi nai main...

    :D

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  9. Oh and aatmvishwas is Self Confidence...

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  10. Mai Kaam kare Ghar Wappaas Aya,
    To Dekha Machili to Mere Ghar mein Thi,
    Pass Jake deeka to Paahar to Uske Aquarium mie thi..
    Taab yaad aya..
    Ki woh pathar nahi machi ka khana tha..
    Jo maine pani mein phekha tha...
    Aur woh meri Boss nahi
    Offic ki ek rapchik Female ti...
    Jisne email ki thi ..


    Ok...enough of my bakwaas...

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  11. atyant prabhavshaali thi ye kavita aapki...:-) you must keep trying your hand on thee...it was different and nice....

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  12. saras, adbhut, avishvasniya :P

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  13. Bhumika , last ke tino kaun hai

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  14. # You Are..
    sahi sahi :D

    # That was it...
    ji dhanyawaad :)

    # Fighterjet..
    thanks..

    # Bhumika...
    :D

    # Aro...
    :P

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  16. @ om
    @ i am

    kya baat hai :)
    machali ki daastaan toh badi sahee hai!

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  17. #Aro

    saras (in gujarati) means nice

    adbhut and avishvasniya - do i need to expalain that :P

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  18. Le Aro,

    teri hindi aur gujrati bhi theek ho rahi hai.. angrezy aur bangla to mast hai hi !!!

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  19. it is not only a sense of completeness ... but a sense of balance ... i feel complete when someone... something ....somewhere keeps my balance

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  20. Fair enough :) makes a lot of sense to me...

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