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02/01/07

HoLd....

I can feel it on my ears... yes its kinda cold...
all i need right now is some hold...

a hold on life...
a hold on emotions...

a hold on happiness...
and a few notions...

i wish that the bad goes where it should...
i would have taken it there only if i could...

i wish that the people lost wake up and realise..
i wish the ones who gave up, understand to be precise...

i wish the white wines do not taste this bad...
at least not like the one i had...

i wish that smiles become cheaper...
and anger is no longer sold...
all i need right now is some hold...

a hold on patience...
a hold on faith...

a hold on happiness...
and memories that don't fade...

i wish i remember more birthdays then i did last year...
i wish i give more smiles then a single tear...


bas kar cheete.... bahut senti ho gaya tu :D

13 comments:

  1. someone is thinking loud ..good
    cos analyzing and observing are essential for improvement ..


    god bless u ..
    may this year bring u loads of happiness and smile

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  2. i wish the white wines do not taste this bad...
    at least not like the one i had...


    :D

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  3. # anony...
    yo :)

    thank you so much... God bless you too...

    # deepak..
    hehehe... :D

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  4. tum sher likho, engrezi poems nai ;)

    mangta hu to deti nahi
    jawab meri baat ka...

    samje :D

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  5. life, emotions, happiness,
    faith, patience,memories, smiles...

    there, hold it!
    hold it all...
    and its time u held a party! :D

    cheers cheete, jayada senti hone ka nahi, kya?

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  6. thats a lot of things u put in one poem.....
    NICE......
    i think u should expand the prospective list of books
    *travelouges
    *"c'est la vie " theories
    *poems

    waiting waiting
    :)

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  7. ab ye wala item bole to ekdum naya diya aapne bhai...

    kisi se inspire hoke likha ya kisi se inspire hone ki wish karte karte?

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  8. All I can say is brilliant. very beautiful, decent and absolutely fantastic.

    Keep going .......

    Just dont really get senti.

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  9. # burf...

    discourage kar raha hai bhai ko... tereko pasand nai aai to kya hua... main to phir bhi likhunga !!!

    # mayuri...
    hmm... ji :D

    # hiya
    :) thanks...

    me waiting waiting too :)

    # aseem...
    arre bhai ka old face hai ye bhi... ek time par dedicated poems likhta thaa main...

    # abhi...
    thanks bro...

    really senti nai hota main :D

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  10. hmm...senti toh kaafi tha...bt one thing m sure abt is the taste of white wine...all depends where u take the sip from :P

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  11. @ dip...

    valid point... very very very valid point... i have to try it differently the next time...

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  12. WRITEmore .... Cheers!

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